Score: 8

"Cool"

submission: Newgrounds in a Box

date: August 10, 2007

You can tell there was alot of effort and the downloaded version can be helpful
but the flash version... Why would you go on newgrounds, To go on newgrounds?

Score: 6

"The deaths arent smooth enough"

submission: short madness (46 fps)

date: August 9, 2007

you smoothed Hank
But It looks like you FBF'ed the Victims

Could you make the Full thing plz?

Score: 7

"Ill Help you"

submission: 360° Defence

date: August 9, 2007

First the Pros and cons:

-Pros-
++Shops rule
+Bombs are cool
++++Kinda fun

-Cons-
--The Instructions Needs pictures instead of shit loads of text
--I Couldn't Figure out how to use bombs for a while.
----Background Was Terrible
-The enimies was just Lil' Circles

The Improvments:
Picture Instrucions
Better enimies, And paddle
Better background
Song selection
Whats the point of the red bar?
Enemy Abilitys
More upgrades.
Better Quality Shop

So yeah

Score: 7

"I like it"

submission: Flip Flip.

date: August 6, 2007

But could be improved.
Heres some tips on making the sticks Way more realistic
I may be easier or harder
Make a layar for each limb (Leg, Body, head, arms, etc)
Instead of Making frame by frame.
Add Motions tweens and shape tweens. If you get somthing crappy like:
--------------------
Thats bad. Its only striaight
~=-______==~
Thats good. Its curvy so you connect the Limbs without Going stright
Make sure to rotate as well.

Also add a microphone!
ANd the blood: The Splatter is Fantastic: The leakage isnt
Use the Sharpen tool and Curve tool to Make it more Splattered looking
Also Add diffrent colors (darker red, lighter red) Just like you did in the splatter.

And thats all hope it helped. please respond on if this was useful and Im done!
Good luck on other Flashes

Score: 7

"good but bugs."

submission: The Torture Chamber II

date: August 4, 2007

First off: Not enough gore. if your gona rip sum1s spine out there should be bursts of blood per heart beat

second, Oxygen thing doesnt work. once you turn it off. it goe back to on
And it doesnt kill him.

and last: he doesn't think anything when its cold.

Score: 9

"Crunk Fo' Shizzle"

submission: Photoshop tut 2 - 3D orb

date: August 2, 2007

ty man by the way:
if i add opaquity to the orbs color will it be a glass orb :3

nice tutorial good for making fortune tellars and stuff

Score: 8

"found bug"

submission: GeoWars

date: August 2, 2007

great game but:
whenever I play the game quit and go back in like a minute later the loading creen goes -----------------------------------RE PLAY -----------------------------------RE PLAY

its annoying

Score: 10

"Heres my awesome song"

submission: Punk-o-matic

date: August 1, 2007

best of all. nuff said:

8584-0-------2---2---2-----6-6-9-----
-------------------------------------
-----------5-4------7-7-7-7-2---2---4 3---37-3b----------------------------
----------------------6-8-1---9------
9-2-a---0---8--7778-7a---------------
---------------------------------

Score: 8

"nice"

submission: LickitySplit HotDog Event

date: July 28, 2007

Nice very brave. although a few people in that mall might think your an antennion whore :D

Score: 9

"So true"

submission: Resident Evil 4: RGNR8RS

date: July 20, 2007

so so very true. I hate the iron maidens. or spikey regenerators. those are just asses